Meann Santiago

Rookie (Cabanatuan City, Nueva Ecija Philippines)

Broken Promises - Poem by Meann Santiago

I never thought it would end up this way
The love I knew we would share forever
We have vowed and promised on that special day
But here we are parting ways coz we can’t be together

Broken wings yes that’s what I have
Shivering under the rain, alone in the darkness
Not knowing how to fix broken pieces of my heart
Without you by my side I don’t know where to start

Letting go of you seems the hardest part
You are a part of me and my only life
But since you chose to broke what we have vowed
I can’t do anything but to let you leave my side

Yes, I am hurt and don’t know what to say
I choose to die for now in order for you to stay
Even if it means breaking our own promises
As long as you live and find your true happiness


Comments about Broken Promises by Meann Santiago

  • (5/8/2011 9:04:00 AM)


    thank you sir!
    God bless always...
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  • Romeo Della Valle (5/8/2011 8:33:00 AM)


    A very well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011


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