Saturday, July 9, 2011

Broken Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can't fly when I try the odds seemed stacked against my success
Have I failed after giving it all I've got or have I not givin it my best
Can't fly when i try I notice a change in my surroundings
Or is it a change in me cause when I look around Im still grounded
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'ABORTION' on page 4.

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Ozie James

Ozie James

Milledgeville Ga.
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