Monday, February 6, 2017

Brokenly Unspoken Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel so broken yet I don't know what broke me
I feel like I'm breaking yet I don't know what breaks me
I feel so taken yet i can't see what takes me
My thoughts they pull me out from reality
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Joshua Renner
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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2017

It is an existential absurdity to conceive of life without its ups and downs. It is equally true that forces of the mind can be brought to bear on one's negative thoughts or the forces of fate. An insightful portrayal of depression - the loss of sunshine in a life at its lowest ebb, well articulated and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Joshua.

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