Brokenly Unspoken Poem by Joshua Renner

Brokenly Unspoken

Rating: 5.0


I feel so broken yet I don't know what broke me
I feel like I'm breaking yet I don't know what breaks me
I feel so taken yet i can't see what takes me
My thoughts they pull me out from reality
My words just cannot express me
The things in my head I won't let them see
They're taking over to me
Cannot see what takes over me
I can't feel and yet I feel everything
Mortism is my one true faith
One true thing I do is throw myself away
Can't take life yet life takes me
Cannot see yet what still takes me

Monday, February 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,existence,existentialism,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 01 March 2017

It is an existential absurdity to conceive of life without its ups and downs. It is equally true that forces of the mind can be brought to bear on one's negative thoughts or the forces of fate. An insightful portrayal of depression - the loss of sunshine in a life at its lowest ebb, well articulated and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Joshua.

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