Brother Of Mine Poem by Paige Venegas

Brother Of Mine

Rating: 5.0


I needed a reason to call you?
Bad news had to happen to hear your voice?
I thought the spontenous of talks made us close.
Havent heard from you in months,
You sniff the coke.
You drink the drinks.
You smoke the weed.
Then I get the call?
Call me when your my brother,
The sober one.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 04 May 2012

I can fully identify with this well crafted and poignant write! I know the feeling when my daughter Sarah doesn't call me at all hours and sometimes for days! This is really a touching write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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