Brown Eyes Poem by My heart beat stumbles and my back bone crumbles

Brown Eyes



So when i look at you at
you from across the room.
And thinking of everything we can
and cant be

You look at me with those
brown eyes
And I see something in there
But i dont know what it is

So when you see me looking
at you
i look away really fast or not
I just like to look into your eyes

There is something about you
that makes me likes you more and
more

Is it cause you are a bad boy
or a skater boy or something else

So i set here still looking at
you from across the room.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Aside from a few typos that was very good. It sounded like a song to me when I read it. I really like it. Nice write :)

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