Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Brown Eyes Comments

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So when i look at you at
you from across the room.
And thinking of everything we can
and cant be
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My heart beat stumbles and my back bone crumbles
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Aside from a few typos that was very good. It sounded like a song to me when I read it. I really like it. Nice write :)

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