Monday, July 30, 2012

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Speak of what>>> nothingness
Apocalyptic words that rain
Typing fierce>>> lion
Clawing at my brain
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Singleton M. Tate
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Kelly Seale 04 August 2012

now back to this... I love your analogies and imagery here! And your choice to use ]]] is very effective in drawing me in... with an almost mesmerizing effect. Love this one! great Ink! -Kelly.

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Saadat Tahir 01 August 2012

Oh wow...i never read a national geographic documentary in verse... that's what it is... graphic raw and powerful...touching and gripping.... dramatic mosaic of canine power applied to life in the concrete jungle nice cheers sat

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