(A senryu)
My child blows bubbles
and chases them while laughing
in the autumn wind.
innovative style..linked to lovely combination of short lines.. fine write..10++
what a lovely combination of child, nature and joy...Beautiful lines, Rory
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What a vivid happy picture this paints. I can imagine the colors of the bubbles and the color from the autumn leaves. Beautiful Rory! 10 Karin Anderson