Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Bumble Bee Comments

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She had a hard time
But when it came midnight bee's played so beautiful
Whisperd to the bee
Scratches on his back, scratches on mine
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anita miles
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David Beckham 21 June 2011

there is something inherently very personal in this poem, the verses are so so so close together as to suggest intimacy between the poet and a significant other. At least that how it comes across to me. great work tfs.10/10

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