Wednesday, August 27, 2008

Burns Comments

Rating: 5.0

It does not take much to take me back.
But the memories do not seem real.
They are almost dreamlike except for the emotions.
Puffs of smoke, unseen but still stinging my eyes.
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Hades Pandemonium 27 August 2008

Very nicely written. Good use of description, which produces a clear picture of whats happening. Excellent work: -)

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