Monday, February 23, 2015

By The Beach Fire. Comments

Rating: ★5.0

We sat on the beach.
Backs tucked into hollows.
Scooped out of the peaked dunes.
The fire we had built flickered
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Miki Byrne
dark pink fireflies beach
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Kim Barney 23 February 2015

This is really good. Reminds me of sitting by campfires both as a Boy Scout years ago and also with my children and grandchildren in more recent years. Very well written. I am voting it a ten.

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Miki Byrne

Miki Byrne

Birmingham UK
Miki Byrne
Miki Byrne
Birmingham UK
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