By Their Fruits Comments

(cont.) Nonetheless, aka 'however', I gladly give your poem five (5) stars and may share your poem with others here. ***** bri : ) . bri : )

If you ask for help and I take the time to help (which I've tried doing for some others) you may benefit greatly. It is a nice thing to warn of 'scamming', though I don't think you gave specifics. ;) (cont.)

I assume your 'first' language is not English. Many of your errors are easy to correct (of course 'easy' if you know American English a bit better and PROOFREAD CAREFULLY. ;))

Welcome, 'new poet' on PH. Though you seem to need more study/practice at using English, I understand what you write and very much enjoyed this poem. (cont.)

'Emmatobs de thought writer', last line of poem: I'm sure you mean to use 'troll(s) ': 'In slang, a troll is a person who posts or makes inflammatory, insincere, digressive, [1] extraneous, or off-topic messages online'

last line: I'm sure you mean 'troll(s) ': 'In slang, a troll is a person who posts or makes inflammatory, insincere, digressive, [1] extraneous, or off-topic messages online'

stanza 10: DUPE: 'A person who is deceived' 'intertness'? ? I'm sure you mean 'inertness': 'Lack of activity or exertion'. : )

stanza 9: 'They do not care which rules they subvent They couldn't care less if people get hurt'. I believe you mean to use 'subvert'. But there IS a word 'subvent', I've just learned. bri ;)