indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Cactus Dreams - Poem by indira babbellapati

when i toss in my bed
my own thorns prick me
i dream of a soft bed
every night i retire

when i see my neighbour
in full bloom splashing colors
i look forlorn at my thorns
dreaming of the day i bloom

when tears drip down my
thorny epidermis, i unwittingly
raise my arms to wipe them away
it's then i dream of soft hands

when around me i see
shades offered to the weary
i look at my thorny self in shame
and dream of a rebirth...


Comments about Cactus Dreams by indira babbellapati

  • (1/20/2010 2:26:00 AM)

    'i look at my thorny self in shame
    and dream of a rebirth'
    I like your thorny supersensible cactus!
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  • (1/15/2010 11:17:00 AM)

    ~very lovely poem~ heartfelt and well written. Thankyou. Please visit mine. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 15, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 3, 2010

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