Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Caged Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel your eyes upon me
I have nowhere to go
I retreat to the corner
I still see you there,
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Rima Kane
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Jack Price 24 March 2009

So intense, I could almost feel what you were writing. I only pray that this was not a real life situation that you had to go through. I loved the energy of this work.

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