California Vette Poem by tam law

California Vette

Rating: 5.0


That one sound
heard just today,
caused life to stir just this way:

That one sound
lit a fire so deep,
it burned on and on with no sleep

That one sound
was starlight
in the darkest of night

That one sound
moved thee
like shoes on your feet

That one sound
had energy
to take on many a feat

That one sound
kept the mind clear
to cipher each verse you hear

That one sound
kept to a beat
that left none still in their seat

That one sound
conversed in such a strong tongue,
it rivaled the passing game of Steve Young

That one sound
wants respect and check/ques
and comes all the way from the Bay

That one sound
is ''Got To Get It''
by Honor Roll's Josie Stingray

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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