Calming Effect Poem by Jerry Abrahamson

Calming Effect

Rating: 3.8


Doesn't it seem funny
That something so simple
As writing a poem
Can have a calming effect

And then, we can go on
With the rest of our day
Realizing that we have
Calmed down a bit

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 24 November 2008

Hi Jerry - I like the simplicity of this poem! I would like it even more if you finish with a description of how it makes you calm down. For example: 'Realizing that we have scribbled fears out onto paper. ' (?) Best wishes - Cheryl

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