Saturday, March 21, 2015

Can We Unite? Comments

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It Ruins all, forget about constructing,
Bends the Imaan, wronging to one another,
Do its people survive?
It separates, puts all in danger,
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Michael Walker 19 October 2016

I hope that we can unite: Christian, Muslim, and Jewish. Wars of religion make no sense. I am sure there are 'more legends left for it'. M.Walker.

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Kelly Kurt 28 October 2015

A nicely written poem and plea for unity and peace. Thanks for sharing, AbdiSaber

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Michael Walker 27 May 2015

Effective use of rhetorical questions. Eventually, I think war will end. We can unite, one day. M. Walker.

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Abdisaber Yusuf 04 June 2015

THANK YOU BROTHER!

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Abdisaber Yusuf 17 May 2015

Thank you for your inspiration.

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Chinedu Dike 11 April 2015

A lovely work of art, well articulated and nicely penned with a call for Universal Brotherhood of Man. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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