Can We Work It Out? Poem by charlie bones

Can We Work It Out?



Could we work it out?
Become a family?
I promise i'll be better,
Mummy i'll do anything,

Mummy please don't cry,
Your pain is killing me,
And tearing me down,
I'll be so much nicer,
I'll be so much better,
I'll go to bed when you tell me too,
Just please don't cry,
And try and be happy,

Daddy please listen,
Hear me out,
I need your arms around me,
I want you to hold me forever,
Come back home,
I question when I will next feel your love?
Feel your arms around me?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem is about my mum feeling happier and my dad to listen to me more and hear me out.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jasmine Smith 16 July 2012

Well i think youve portrayed this well enough, for me to understand the meaning of this situation.

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