Max D. Hornbogen

Can You Feel Me

Can you feel me as if I was standing near you, could you even try to feel what I am feeling inside. But I can feel my numbness in me and the pain is so cold, that I can’t stand no more. So can you feel me when I’m standing a million miles away and my heart is feeling empty without you. And you seem to be the one who fills the light in me. Can you feel me when I’m away, can you even try to feel what I am feeling inside. I am the one who fills the cup of joy and I know what it is like to be alone. But I can fill the light in your heart and there won’t be any darken corner. Can you feel me or even try to be me, cause everything around me is kind of blurry and there is no clear blue sky above me. Not even a train of thought coming to mind. So if your out there just tell me where I need to be, cause the numbness is getting to me. So can you feel me, as if I was standing near you. Can I steal your pain away and take those tears of yours, so I can feel of what your feeling inside. Don’t you know that you’re the light and soul of me, no matter where you go I’ll be there right beside you. So now lets take a breath and see how long you can hold, just hold until everything else fades away. So can you feel me as if I was standing near you, now this is going to be the end once and for all.




Max D. Hornbogen
March 7th,2008
2: 00 P.M. (Day)

Poem Submitted: Friday, April 25, 2008

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  • .Kathryn Van Atta (4/25/2008 10:33:00 PM)

    thats a good poem

    i really like this

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