Can You Help Me? Poem by Mary Amrutha

Can You Help Me?

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I couldn't keep going on like this
any more, not any more.
I am out of my mind,
I really am,
what to do?
I am totally out of my mind
I really am
Can you help me
to run away from this situation
this bloody damn one...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 07 March 2014

Hi Mary This poem is over a year old so I trust the stress you were feeling is over, or you're coping with it. The way you wrote it with short, choppy lines and repetition like matters begun, self-interrupted, and taken up again follows the confused workings of the mind during stress. I know I have had times when my thoughts followed the same confused tracks of your poem. And since you actually wrote them down - as few of us do - we will be able to recognize them when the crisis occurs and be better prepared to deal with it.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 22 November 2013

Beautiful poem of yours. Great work Kindly rate and comment my poems

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Mary Amrutha

Mary Amrutha

Ernakulam, kerala, India
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