I couldn't keep going on like this
any more, not any more.
I am out of my mind,
I really am,
what to do?
I am totally out of my mind
I really am
Can you help me
to run away from this situation
this bloody damn one...
Beautiful poem of yours. Great work Kindly rate and comment my poems
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I would like to translate this poem
Hi Mary This poem is over a year old so I trust the stress you were feeling is over, or you're coping with it. The way you wrote it with short, choppy lines and repetition like matters begun, self-interrupted, and taken up again follows the confused workings of the mind during stress. I know I have had times when my thoughts followed the same confused tracks of your poem. And since you actually wrote them down - as few of us do - we will be able to recognize them when the crisis occurs and be better prepared to deal with it.