Captain Lovell, ['My eyes are shaky and glimmer like the stars'] Comments

Extraordinary. All that unique way of seeing things and relating to things just flows out of her and the readers know her better than they know their friends. She really gets inside of us. She's the real deal.

double like a cloud of mayflies on the lake. Great line. and a very unusual style which I'm beginning to like a lot. I think a nine at present. Well done. Tom Billsborough

Very good poem.keep up