Carving Tears Poem by Locura Alaam

Carving Tears

Rating: 3.5
 


A long time it sure has been
Tell me do you miss my pen?
The words of ink that I lay down
To rest on paper without a frown
Relaxed indeed with thoughts of you
In my head sitrring, sweet and true
I miss your eyes, I miss your smiles
I'm left with sighs, it's been a while
I must confess, I feel alone...
I want tor est and see a dawn
It's been some months since last I had
A proper rest that's not so bad
What's wrose is knowing for sure a fact
That this won't ever reach your hand
Whether I carve water or sand
It is the same: Unwritten Pact
I want no fame, or part in a game
My life, the rain... Call me insane
The truth remains: I love you, dear
Would you believe if carved on a tear...?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pc Stone 13 January 2013

This poem is so beautiful and it inspired me in so many ways The part when you said I want no fame, or part in a game My life, the rain... Call me insane was very beautiful and touching it made me cry =)

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Rachel Streek 13 January 2013

This poem is beautiful. Iv missed your poems.

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