Catching My Heart Poem by Alyssa Ray

Catching My Heart

Rating: 4.8


You want to catch my heart?
Can I trust you?
You must love it
Hold it in your hands
And keep it until you die
Too much responsibility?
You must tell it
Not to be scared
Keep it close to you
And my heart will beat faster
Will you be able?
I thought you would

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 01 August 2009

A good poem Alyssa. Very strong structure and very nice flow. Good writing. Lynn

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Shekhar Joshi 24 July 2009

nicely written.........a good theme..... liked it......good one..... ;)

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really beautiful. since i have to have more characters i'm just gunna tell you that i had to have 20 characters. i think i've got them all sooo bye! ! !

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