Caught A Whiff Of Memory Poem by Ravensclaw jamie

Caught A Whiff Of Memory

Rating: 4.5


Caught a whiff of memory
& stars fall like tears across the sky
and I wonder why I feel this way tonight?
The familiar sadness lingers still, like in some smoke filled room...
I continue to breath in the lonely uncomfort & sigh a breath of discontentment & uncertainty...
And I wonder why, when I look into your eyes my soul doesn't feel intact?
At home, one, complete, embraced, content, comforted?
The emptiness is just a womb, continuing to breed...
Understanding nothing from inside these eyes, feeling nothing from within this soul.
Love is nothing without magic, without empathy
without connection of the two souls..
Nothing without Understanding
Consideration
Caring
Oneness!
J.C.V.
july '2000'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Niki Story 15 April 2008

well said....I agree...I really enjoyed this one as well!

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