Tuesday, November 1, 2005

Caught In The Whirlwind Of Memory Comments

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Daisey’s father
leaped into a D train
when she was 28
now at 34
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Charles Chaim Wax
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kskdnj sajn 16 February 2006

Excellent. Some children always look out their parents window...but some can open the blinds from the outside. Thanks for sharing.

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Max Reif 01 November 2005

man, that stuff about the parents' house and ours, I'd put that in poetry anthologies! Michael, below, may have a point. I'm still bookmarkin' this in my favorite poems.

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Michael Shepherd 01 November 2005

Lively mind, warm heart, skilful expression, but I wouldn't mind the lines coupled into one.

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