Saturday, May 2, 2009

Centuries Comments

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I feel as though the worlds weight and pressure has been lifted from my back
Its been a long time since I felt this way
Seems as though my minds been cleared
I haven't felt this way in a while
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Brian Kwak
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Bri Edwards 24 November 2020

You left out quite a FEW apostrophes, but the poem works for me, AND, with the name Brian, you can't be ALL BAD! :) bri

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 May 2020

Write comment. Such a nice start, Brian K. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 May 2020

Since all that happens in my life is a disaster The pain, the drama It seems all too real to me The suns coming up and I see the light.. pain, light, drama, disaster.. so many of human emotions......... thank you dear poet.. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 May 2020

After all I've been through I can still have that hope That little gleam of light It seems like centuries I know its been awhile for me.. living in hope and full of hope. tony

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