Changes Poem by Micheal Olaniyi

Changes



Am so confuse, even don't know where to start from, but is this how life will goes on?
I need a change,
i need a true me,
even though defeat stand in front akimbo,
i am ready to scold it,
for there is a scope,
standing in front of me,
leading to my success,
only if i never say die!

Moreso, i am good to go,
ready to do it for my generation,
neither through stemp nor ladder,
but am going for the lift,
so i could earn the quote of the successors,
' to have striven,
to have made the effort,
to have been through to some certain ideas,
this alone is worth of the struggle'.

Thursday, November 7, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: success
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Griffith 30 July 2014

This poem displays a significant and powerful message but need some work. It is till very raw like clay in a potter's hand and is in need of shaping. Need to check for word choice and grammar. Basically, it's a lovely poem but need some work.

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