Thursday, June 23, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

As He stood there in the falling rain
His eye's blaring and swelling with the pain
He remembered all the times he had spent
Laughing, smiling, crying and more
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Drack Valentine
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Composed well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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