Checking Out Poem by Bardof Barnet

Checking Out

Rating: 5.0


Waiting in line at the checkout
In front of me a couple
Relish some coffee and a bicker
As they pack legs of lamb
The tissues and the jam
They don't notice your eyelids flicker

For a moment as you scan
The good and bad selections
Made down the aisles along the years
Shopping by yourself
Maybe left on the shelf
Your own brand of hopes and fears

We chat as I pack
And you squat in your box
Striking up a decent rapport
When suddenly you confide
Don't think I can abide
Being bagged for life here any more

Your eyes well for a second
Time to pay for it all
Say goodbye and quietly walk out
I watch your eyes fill
With tears at the till
But we both know you'll never check out

Sunday, November 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 27 November 2016

Bard, welcome to Poem Hunter! This appears to be the first poem that you have posted on this site. Congratulations on a good start. I think this poem is well done. Looking forward to reading many more of yours in the future.

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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2016

Insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Bardof.

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