Sunday, November 27, 2016

Checking Out Comments

Rating: 5.0

Waiting in line at the checkout
In front of me a couple
Relish some coffee and a bicker
As they pack legs of lamb
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Bardof Barnet
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Kim Barney 27 November 2016

Bard, welcome to Poem Hunter! This appears to be the first poem that you have posted on this site. Congratulations on a good start. I think this poem is well done. Looking forward to reading many more of yours in the future.

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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2016

Insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing Bardof.

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