Chest Chambers Poem by Reject Ragdoll

Chest Chambers



My heart hurts so badly I just can't explain...
It's too deep
The pain is buried at the bottom of its sea
It's boiling up now and eating away at the walls
Oh! No! I can't stand this irritation
It's not like a burn, not like a sting
But more like a meloncholy melody
aching in the blood
that is pumped through my scarred veins
No! I cannot take this pain
And invisible hand is squeezing my chambers
I want to rip my hand inside
and end this with a fist fight
Oh! No! I can't stand this screaming silence!
Burst! Just burst! And drink to your thirst!
What is it that you want?
What is it that you need?
I gasp as the answer comes to me
That I am not the only one with this plea
That there is someone else that might have the key
No, I think to myself, and force my heart to reject these hypotheses.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Green 20 March 2009

Great job! I love it. (hee hee now i can read your work!)

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anurag duggal 19 March 2009

This is a wonderful write... a nice flow... Good use of words for a magical effect

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