Thursday, September 12, 2013

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Hidden desires creep like slate black spider legs across your spine
In this night I can feel you hide the shivers and shakes from me
But once I’ve left
And now you realized that you had the best
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Joshua Bantum
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Craig Steiger 12 September 2013

nice poem, but the as you start to drain /...in the distance you can feel my train is a little awkward, looking for rhyme.... but overall, thank you

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Joshua Bantum

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