Children's Smile Poem by sakalabaktula sairaj

Children's Smile

Rating: 5.0


Children's smile costs more than diamond,
Children's smile beautiful than rose bud.

Children's heart as cool as moon,
They are raising like morning sun.

We should not hurt their soft heart,
Their just pulp of mud, someone should make it beautiful pot.

We should avoid child labor,
If not our nation can't grow never and ever.

They can change the future of our nation,
we should care them and for their mission.

We are just biting, pushing into sorrow;
they have capacity to change the tomorrow.

Don't get angry on children,
They are just God in form of Man.

Children's Smile
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
about a children
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 01 June 2019

The photograph you added is of such purity, look at the eyes of the children. Beautiful photograph taken and added here. Thank you, dear teacher!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 June 2019

I cite here two lines of your lovely worded poem, absolutely thought provoking and the most important message is truly correct, children are the promise of tomorrow. Here are your lines I cited: We should avoid child labor, If not our nation can't grow never and ever...........................Indeed, so truest! You have done your task as a good poet: you have brought the precious and most important message to the surface.Excellent poem! A 10++++++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 November 2017

Nice poem... good back and new theme ground...10 There is no ill feeling in his or her mind That we can easily make or find She or he has whole of the world at his feet And smiles always to greet

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