Choice Poem by Surabhi Mathur

Choice

Rating: 4.8


'On the line of life
I stand at the middle
Whether horizontal or vertical...
One end is a call from fleshy world
The other is the yell by nature
One is the appeal of body
The other is the claim of soul
One allure me to the heights
The other enchants me to the depths...
Undoubtedly, the choice will be mine
But which side to elect..?
A very strenuous choice
Puzzling me the scriptures...
Started I, to look upon the traces
Synthetic path has more footprints
While the authentic witnessed a very few
Which are about to vanish...
I should follow the crowd, I thought
Yes, I should, it will give me heights
My destinations are sure here...
NO... A second thought occur
I should follow the other one
Though, full of unsurities, it is
Though, I will be alone
But, I have to, Yes, I have to
To make a new way
To meet with my origin
I have to, Yes, I have to...'
SURABHI MATHUR

Wednesday, March 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menato San 23 March 2016

Fantastic poem.Keep up thank you for sharing

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Surabhi Mathur 23 March 2016

Thanks... :)

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M@psh Nama 03 April 2020

Good lins...👌

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Anshul 18 November 2017

Nice Poem 👌👍

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Akhilesh Jhanwar 17 November 2017

May God bless you with all the strength to follow the other one path. Thank you for inspiring.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 29 March 2016

I went through your poem in a single breath, enjoyed, felt at one with you till the last few lines. I thought your heart stopped and mind started working! But why? Did you have a break during the composing of this poem? Subhas,29/3/2016

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Surabhi Mathur 04 May 2016

No, I didn't take any break in the composition of this poem as I never do with any poem of mine. Our thoughts during reading any work varies from reader to reader that's why I guess you feel some sort of detachment in last few lines. By the way thank u for reading and appreciating it. :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 March 2016

One is the appeal of body The other is the claim of soul One allure me to the heights The other enchants me to the depths... i have to say. yes i have to say yes a great poem with so many ideas compiled togehter. thank you very much dear poetess. tony

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Surabhi Mathur 23 March 2016

Thank you so much...your appreciating words means a lot to me as it is the beginning of my poetic career... thank you :)

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