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Sunday, March 18, 2018

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Rating: 4.8
I live, I breath, I cry

Lately it seems that's all I can do
It hurts so much I could die

But tell me who can I blame for what am going through



I dream, I hope, I seek

"Don't give up" I remind myself everyday

The me who's trying to survive is so weak

But I ask God for strength, night and day I pray



I fell, I failed, I lost

This battle I call life has once again knocked me down

"Everything comes at a price" I remind myself first and foremost

But through the stormy seas, I keep swimming, I refuse to drown



I believe, I fight, I conquer

In life, there will always be battles I win and battles I lose

But no matter the times I lose, to defeat I will not surrender

Cause in the end it all comes down to what I choose
Soha Zaki
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,failure,faith,fighter,hardships ,hope,hurt,hurting,life,loss
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Akhtar Jawad 06 April 2018
I believe, I fight, I conquer In life, there will always be battles I win and battles I lose
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Khairul Ahsan 26 March 2018
A very inspiring poem. Loved the grit and tenacity expressed, to fight on despite odds. 'But I ask God for strength, night and day I pray' - yeah, that's the way!
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Soha Zaki 03 April 2018
thank you so much for your comment sir, I really appreciate it.
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 March 2018
I dream, I hope, I seek Don't give up I remind myself everyday The me who's trying to survive is so weak But I ask God for strength, night and day I pray. dream, dream, dream... do not stop dreaming and you are going to conquer all the failures...... a great future is for you.. believe in God. you will conquer.. tony
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Soha Zaki 25 March 2018
thank you tremendously for your words of encouragement, it means a lot to me =)
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Naila Rais 21 March 2018
I am going through same thing.... I can really understand it how horrible it is.... Many negative thoughts come too my mind though I try to understand it is just for a time.... All will be ok... My message BELIEVE IN ALMIGHTY... he will surely help someday.... Nicely expressed.. ???????? Naila ????
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Soha Zaki 23 March 2018
thank you so much Naila for your support and lovely words =)) [3 May God bless you and give you the strength you need to overcome your hardships [3 [3
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Dr Antony Theodore 21 March 2018
I dream, I hope, I seek Don't give up I remind myself everyday The me who's trying to survive is so weak But I ask God for strength, night and day I pray living in hope and the promise to oneself.. i will not surrender.. thank u dear poetess. tony
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Soha Zaki 23 March 2018
thank you so much sir for your lovely comment.
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Chinedu Dike 19 March 2018
An insightful philosophical piece of poetry elegantly brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. Beautiful motivational and inspirational poem set aside for sober reflection. Lovely indeed, Soha. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
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Soha Zaki 19 March 2018
Thank you so much for your inspiring and kind words, it meant a lot and I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my poem =))
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Jazib Kamalvi 19 March 2018
A good start with a nice poem, Soha. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
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Soha Zaki 19 March 2018
Thank you so much. I will surely check it out =)
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