Chopped Prose Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Chopped Prose

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THINGS i find a bit odd,
my mom who died of
old age, has a place to
sleep, and a place of her
own, and the homeless or
working, have no place
to sleep..................and
some times, nothing to
eat, , , , , , , , , , , ,

Tuesday, December 26, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: mom,sleep
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 December 2006

Interesting thought, David..but of which home do you speak of though...here, as in an empty housesnce your mom's pasing& that a homeless person could be living in? Or, her final resting place & new home that holds no time or motgage...? Either way, David, this is a fine Write...Great concept! frank

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