Circles Poem by Starr Downing

Circles

Rating: 4.3


Going in Circles

Some small some big

Going in Circles

We just dig and dig

Seem to started out like a straight line

That turned in to one big circle that

is gradually getting small

Now faster and faster we get around this circle to the starting point

The point were we hold

the love we got left and wont let go

I love u with all my mind heart and soul

But that's not enough

And this i know

We try and fight to end these circles why they are so

Now that i don't know

And it will puzzle me till I grow old

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 27 August 2008

In circle love finds no end nor death, it is best shared when there is not corners to hide! A 10.

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Tanya Stanford 22 August 2008

So sad but true. One's lost in that circle, you need to ask yourself how true is his love. Will it become a positive circle like maybe a wedding ring or stay leaving you confused? Time will tell. Love the format once again different and unique. Love it.

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