Tuesday, May 4, 2010

Clockwork Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tick tock
Tick tock,
The grandfather clock
Tries not to stop.
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Robert James Robinson
COMMENTS
Joe Becker 04 May 2010

Nice job Robert! This poem is really ingenious, I wouldn't be surprised if you won a contest for this one.

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Theodora Onken 04 May 2010

Nice work Robert and thank you for your comment on mine: More Words. Ms. Theodora Onken

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Ric Bastasa 04 May 2010

welcome robert to the world of poetry bleed and be happy we kill time here too.. nice work you have here, i salute you

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Rob Robinson 04 May 2010

Hi, I'm new here. Please give me any feed back you can on this poem I created. Thanks.: D

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