Clouds Poem by Mirabai

Clouds

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Clouds -
I watched as they ruptured,
ash black and pallid I saw mountainous clouds
split and spew rain
for two hours.
Everywhere water, plants and rainwater,
a riot of green on the earth.
My lover's gone off
to some foreign country,
sopping wet at our doorway
I watch the clouds rupture.
Mira says, nothing can harm him.
This passion has yet
to be slaked.

Tuesday, April 3, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds,plants
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 08 March 2017

Mira says, nothing can harm him. This passion has yet to be slaked......what a wonderful imagery.....indeed it's the truth too...excellent

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Heather Wilkins 11 July 2013

a good write on the clouds. but the sun will shine tomorrow and dry up the rain.

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