Carlos Patino


There go the clouds
floating by
dancing away
in the silence of stars

I am a cloud
silent and white
I'm floating by
without making a sound

I am a cloud
just floating by
I'm a fluff of white
in a sea of light

unnoticed by most
I'll just float by
the rain is approaching
the storm is nearby

give me a chance
I wanna be the sun
instead of this cloud
drifting through time

so here I am
a life dressed in white
overwhelmed by a sea of emotions
that I'd like to call life

Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 13, 2010
Poem Edited: Saturday, May 15, 2010

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  • Eva Ranae (5/18/2010 10:31:00 PM)

    <3 times 1000! <3 its reeeaaallllyyyy impressive =) heh....

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