Cold River Poem by James Timothy Jarrett

Cold River

Rating: 5.0


She wraps me in her icy flow

and chills me 'til I'm warm

Soothes away the open space

With sand and pebbled shores

She tries to lull me downriver

Gently pulling, drowsing

Massaging the miles off me

Relaxing

I know she lies

I know she'd take me to the big river

Carrying me like an eddying breeze

But I want to lay back and dream

And slowly drift away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 17 May 2009

'Chills me til I'm warm ' is a poetic inspiration Jim - - and the piece evokes an adventure in which with the river personified gives the reader a whole new sense of what a dip in a minor river could result in - - a fine contribution Jim....10 from Fay.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success