Betrayal - Poem by James Jarrett

Howard Savage (1/16/2016 2:37:00 PM)

Falling to the floor like autumn leaves, great metaphor. (Report) Reply

Sally Plumb Plumb (1/4/2013 9:02:00 AM)

I loved this piece.
I've written a piece with the same title.
You've illustrated it with just a few words. (Report) Reply

Linda Ori (5/23/2009 7:04:00 PM)

WOW! Short but very powerful. So few words, yet they speak volumes. Sometimes there is more truth in what is left unsaid. Well done, Jim!
Linda :) (Report) Reply

Maria Isabel Oropeza (10/7/2008 9:38:00 PM)

The empty lies, with no worth beneath the expected meaning. Great job. Tough vaugley written, it is vividly detailed in the most astounding way.
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Fred Babbin (8/11/2008 11:09:00 AM)

your poems do touch. (Report) Reply

Goldy Locks (8/2/2008 12:15:00 AM)

fabulous. What a capture! (Report) Reply

Susan Jarvis (7/27/2008 3:54:00 AM)

Vivid and beautiful imagery - you have a special way with words. S :) (Report) Reply