James Jarrett

Freshman - 937 Points (1963 / California)

Betrayal - Poem by James Jarrett

Her whispered words

fall silently to the floor

like autumn leaves.

The night breeze blows

and gently rustles

her empty lies.


Comments about Betrayal by James Jarrett

  • (1/16/2016 2:37:00 PM)

    Falling to the floor like autumn leaves, great metaphor. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/4/2013 9:02:00 AM)

    I loved this piece.
    I've written a piece with the same title.
    You've illustrated it with just a few words.
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  • Linda Ori (5/23/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    WOW! Short but very powerful. So few words, yet they speak volumes. Sometimes there is more truth in what is left unsaid. Well done, Jim!
    Linda :)
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  • (10/7/2008 9:38:00 PM)

    The empty lies, with no worth beneath the expected meaning. Great job. Tough vaugley written, it is vividly detailed in the most astounding way.
    Be Different. Be You
    Elizabeth deSpain
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  • (8/11/2008 11:09:00 AM)

    your poems do touch. (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2008 12:15:00 AM)

    fabulous. What a capture! (Report) Reply

  • Susan Jarvis (7/27/2008 3:54:00 AM)

    Vivid and beautiful imagery - you have a special way with words. S :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 20, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 20, 2008


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