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Betrayal

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Her whispered words

fall silently to the floor

like autumn leaves.

The night breeze blows

and gently rustles

her empty lies.
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Howard Savage 16 January 2016

Falling to the floor like autumn leaves, great metaphor.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 04 January 2013

I loved this piece. I've written a piece with the same title. You've illustrated it with just a few words.

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Linda Ori 23 May 2009

WOW! Short but very powerful. So few words, yet they speak volumes. Sometimes there is more truth in what is left unsaid. Well done, Jim! Linda :)

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Maria Isabel Oropeza 07 October 2008

The empty lies, with no worth beneath the expected meaning. Great job. Tough vaugley written, it is vividly detailed in the most astounding way. Be Different. Be You Elizabeth deSpain

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Fred Babbin 11 August 2008

your poems do touch.

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Goldy Locks 02 August 2008

fabulous. What a capture!

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Susan Jarvis 27 July 2008

Vivid and beautiful imagery - you have a special way with words. S :)

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