James Timothy Jarrett
California
James Timothy Jarrett
California
Betrayal
Rating: ★5.0
Her whispered words
fall silently to the floor
like autumn leaves.
The night breeze blows
and gently rustles
her empty lies.
fall silently to the floor
like autumn leaves.
The night breeze blows
and gently rustles
her empty lies.
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Howard Savage
16 January 2016
Falling to the floor like autumn leaves, great metaphor.
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Sally Plumb Plumb
04 January 2013
I loved this piece.
I've written a piece with the same title.
You've illustrated it with just a few words.
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Linda Ori
23 May 2009
WOW! Short but very powerful. So few words, yet they speak volumes. Sometimes there is more truth in what is left unsaid. Well done, Jim!
Linda :)
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Maria Isabel Oropeza
07 October 2008
The empty lies, with no worth beneath the expected meaning. Great job. Tough vaugley written, it is vividly detailed in the most astounding way.
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Susan Jarvis
27 July 2008
Vivid and beautiful imagery - you have a special way with words. S :)
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