Her whispered words
fall silently to the floor
like autumn leaves.
The night breeze blows
and gently rustles
her empty lies.
I loved this piece. I've written a piece with the same title. You've illustrated it with just a few words.
WOW! Short but very powerful. So few words, yet they speak volumes. Sometimes there is more truth in what is left unsaid. Well done, Jim! Linda :)
The empty lies, with no worth beneath the expected meaning. Great job. Tough vaugley written, it is vividly detailed in the most astounding way. Be Different. Be You Elizabeth deSpain
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Vivid and beautiful imagery - you have a special way with words. S :)