Friday, May 20, 2016

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I am the sun warming you up on the cold days
I am like a coco bean trying to become the best I can be
I am a soda fizzy and alive
I am a bees nest ready to cooperate
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Nickle John
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Reshma Elza Ulahannan 21 May 2016

very nice poem describes whatever the person can do and describe on himself. nice poem to start with you can write more poems from this inspiration

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 May 2016

If you look into my eyes it'll be like the ocean crashing on the shore Very imaginative poem. Dear poet, you hve the great gift of imagination..... make use of it to write wonderful poems. thank you dear poet. tony

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Chinedu Dike 20 May 2016

I describe you as a friend indeed - a cheritable heart of gold. Lovely piece of poetry well articulated and elegantly penned with insight. Beautiful poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Nickie. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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