Friday, August 3, 2012

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Red is for blood
That can rush between
The blue green veins
And raises the streaming
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Mussia M Bronstein
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Adeline Foster 14 August 2012

You have made a great start in writing poetry. To learn the many forms that poetry can take you should read as much of the great masters as you can. I wish you wonderful success. Read mine - The Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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Mussia M Bronstein

Mussia M Bronstein

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