Colours Of The Rainbow Poem by Aisha Alansari

Colours Of The Rainbow

Rating: 3.0


In this colourful, magical world,
7 billion people on earth,
I walk around them...
I see smiles,
but behind them I know there's hurt.

Sometimes, people are really mean,
Trust me everywhere I go, I've seen,
whether it's an old man or woman,
or it's a middle-aged man or woman,
or even teens.

You're beautiful, special and unique,
don't let words make you feel like a freak.

Just forgive and smile for real,
instead of going black or white,
go to red, orange, yellow or blue,
there's also green and purple too!

wherever you are,
whatever you do,
know those colours, in your heart,
you should keep,
even in your sleep,
dream...
about the colours of the rainbow.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about changing the world. STOP! BULLYING PEOPLE! ! BE NICE.
You're better than who's bullying u. don't listen to them. follow your dreams. forget everyone else. don't let anyone stop u. think postive

Definition of metaphors:
colours of the rainbow/colours: Your dreams and think positive be confident about them.

Black: bad(in the poem it says don't go bad)
white: do nothing(in the poem it says don't just sit around do nothing)
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thanks for ur time.like and COMMENT PLZ I NEED OPINIONS!


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 06 November 2015

A nice poem with a nice message.. Thank you for sharing Aisha :)

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Smile :) 19 February 2014

hey aisha so this is a very cute poem *i loove how happy and super positive it is * although you need some imagery to make it more rich and catchy in general very good ...keep it up girl

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Aisha Alansari 03 July 2015

Thank you although I don't need to make it more rich or catchy it's just a poem I wrote my own way. If I wanted to be catchy and all that I would have done that. Thanks again x

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Wahab Abdul 28 August 2013

second sstanza needs work........you repeated words there, tighten things more to make it a wonderful poem..the begining of the poem is super..you are a lovely poetess..love your poems...

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Hussein Ismael 28 August 2013

I got meanings. ummmmm.... nice. Can i say it in your words? You're beautiful, special and unique.

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