Saturday, July 7, 2018

Come A Little Closer-Don't Step Into My Shoes Comments

Rating: 4.2

If i was onthe edge of a building
Would you come there,
screaming my name?
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Princy Prince
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Jazib Kamalvi 07 July 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Princely. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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J Slam 07 July 2018

no one would come screaming your name, they don't care if you live or die..... and you are different or should i say abnormal from others.... you don't deserve the love people give to you.... your a liar cause you brought this upon yourself

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2018

You don't know the pain i am in Until and unless, You step into my shoes....Should i chain myself........ very nice poem.. this touched me how you really write about hurt and its depiction in figurative terms.. thank u dear poet. tony

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