Cometry Poem by Judy Ponceby

Cometry

Rating: 5.0


I discovered a star
shiny and bright.
It burned from within
with glorious light.

I watched as it flared
bright orange then red.
It burst from my hand
and as it fled,

It sparkled and shone,
flying away with a trail
That left me in wonder
as I watched it set sail.

On beyond Saturn
and out past Neptune,
seeking its fortune
its flown too soon.

Silently sailing vast
light years away
Inspiring adventure
in every way.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by a painting of a woman plucking a star from the heavens.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 29 April 2012

Beauty and Talent beautifully blended to become this well crafted and touching write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and WELCOME to the Poetry World! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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