Committing Suicide Comments

I liked this poem, it was dark, but it made me feel. And they rhyming scheme was great. Good job.

Thank you for the compliment and for reading my poem! For people who are contemplating committing suicide they might want to read a book I recently read called 'Life After Life and its exciting sequel Reflections on Life After Life' by Raymond A. Moody, M.D. I think for those who are seriously considering suicide this book may make them want to reconsider. It definately has some powerful messages in it.

A powerful emotions..of great understanding and questioning.. A poem of life and death..a sorrowful talk with God..hope that man and those who have committed suicide..may their souls have ask God's forgiveness..at the heaven's door... Nice concept..great poem!