vijay gupta

Veteran Poet - 1,293 Points (5-5-1950 / meerut, india)

Complete Home On Platform - Poem by vijay gupta

Complete home on platform
Have you ever seen a complete home on the plate form?
You have seen it so many times.
But I have observed it also.
Once a train was on the platform
There was some delay in departure.
Passengers have come out slowly & slowly on the platform.
They were busy in gossiping & some one was criticizing the railways for this unwanted delay.
In the corner a women was sitting on the floor.
That area was covered by the bed sheet.
Her children were playing nearby her.
Her husband was busy in talking with other passengers.
She put eatable items nearby her.
One water bottle & empty glass was also other.
She was watching her children & her husband calmly.
I feel that she was to enjoying this pleasure of a home.
She was not in hurry.
I feel that she have made imaginary walls around her family as they were at home.
It was its own world,
It was a complete home on the platform of an intelligent lady.
(Central idea is provided by my friend Mr. Nirmal Gupta ji of chippi tank, Meerut)

Comments about Complete Home On Platform by vijay gupta

  • (4/13/2008 12:34:00 PM)

    The idea which is revealed here is something new.When there are so many people on the platform and she observes only her family shows her complete devotion to her family.Good example of 'Emotions Recollected In Tranquility' (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 5, 2008

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